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    I'm gonna be honest, when the shitstep started playing, and in the top left corner of the screen, it said "rate comment subscribe" i actually thought it was a joke

    Actual feedback - Get an intro that won't turn people away right away, and be original.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tweezy View Post
    I quite like where you are trying to go. You need to really take care on what you put into the video though. It needs to be funny, something that doesn't happen very often (Like that guy blocking off the tele with a table - I quite liked that. One thing I would suggest. Get lots and lots of clips with traitors being killed (like, really really bad traitors). Try and get them all quite short, around a second or two. Then just play them in quite succession.

    Good luck, i'll sub you X
    Thx a bunch sir!

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    1. Change intro
    2. Make more small-ish clips in order (like Tweezy said)
    3. When people say funny things try to put animation subtitles, that always makes everything funny.
    5. Change intro
    6. Maybe make videos smaller?
    8. Put some funny music in the background (don't make it loud like your freaking intro, make it low and nice)
    10. I skipped #4, #7 and #9 - If you noticed that then good luck and I might subscribe as well....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sleggie View Post
    1. Change intro
    2. Make more small-ish clips in order (like Tweezy said)
    3. When people say funny things try to put animation subtitles, that always makes everything funny.
    5. Change intro
    6. Maybe make videos smaller?
    8. Put some funny music in the background (don't make it loud like your freaking intro, make it low and nice)
    10. I skipped #4, #7 and #9 - If you noticed that then good luck and I might subscribe as well....
    I'll take your suggestions into consideration, thanks a bunch. People giving suggestions/feedback will only help my channel become better. The next TTT fails video will be diff than the first one

    Btw when u guys say 'change intro' are you meaning the music? I can change the music easily lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Smithtainment View Post
    I'll take your suggestions into consideration, thanks a bunch. People giving suggestions/feedback will only help my channel become better. The next TTT fails video will be diff than the first one

    Btw when u guys say 'change intro' are you meaning the music? I can change the music easily lol
    Music & Animation lol

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    This video is not Garrys Mod, we just released it today but here is the new intro

    Minecraft : Survival Games | Episode 4 - Censored - YouTube

    Let me know if you guys like it over the dubstep one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Smithtainment View Post
    This video is not Garrys Mod, we just released it today but here is the new intro

    Minecraft : Survival Games | Episode 4 - Censored - YouTube

    Let me know if you guys like it over the dubstep one.
    Wow. Way better. Did you make the intro 100% or did you just use a default one or a pre-made one?

    EDIT: Maybe remove the "comment" and "subscribe" it sounds cheesy...

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    Made it, and I'll remove the subscribe/comment. Was debating rather to add that or not lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Smithtainment View Post
    Made it, and I'll remove the subscribe/comment. Was debating rather to add that or not lol
    You made it? Well good job!

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